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04/15/2008 11:31:37 PM |
| This image looks too dark. Not cropping the swan's reflections would have helped too. |
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04/15/2008 03:08:37 PM |
Here's my two cents. :)
First of all, the image is underexposed. I can understand that perhaps you wanted a low-key type atmosphere, and I really like them myselve, but I'm not sure it's really working here. Also, I would suggest avoiding cropping off the reflection of the birds, and straightening out the "horizon" in the distance the background. This is an ecxellent concept though - good idea! |
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04/15/2008 02:52:27 PM |
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04/15/2008 06:32:42 AM |
| nice idea.. could have done with more contrast though? |
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04/14/2008 08:48:36 PM |
| Very good idea, the effects are great. It should be just a little lighter though. |
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04/14/2008 04:21:12 PM |
Good concept but a little dull colour wise. I'm sure simple white balance or curves adjustment could have added a lot more vibrant white to the swans and made this a much better shot.
I'd also like to see the very end of the tail and have a little space left and maybe some more of the reflection. |
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04/13/2008 09:46:54 PM |
| Original for sure. I would like it even more if the 'swans' were, well, whiter! |
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04/13/2008 06:18:35 PM |
| Cool minimalist idea, however overall too dark. Better lighting would have given this a lot more impact. |
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04/12/2008 11:07:00 PM |
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04/12/2008 10:50:11 PM |
| Origami swans -- nice idea and lighting. |
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04/12/2008 10:01:41 AM |
| The picture would have been better if there was better lighting. |
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04/11/2008 10:23:49 AM |
| this is a good shot, but its just too dark. maybe another lighting source or a different background |
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04/10/2008 12:11:11 PM |
| Good idea, would liked to have seen the image a bit brighter. |
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04/09/2008 10:42:50 PM |
| Could be a little brighter, but I like the idea! |
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04/09/2008 10:41:34 PM |
| Sweet idea. A blue background/surface and a little more light would have made this very special :) |
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04/09/2008 10:40:00 PM |
| great concept...i would have really liked this better if it was lighter. |
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04/09/2008 08:58:12 PM |
| Nice idea...wish it were brighter and that the reflection was complete. |
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04/09/2008 06:40:34 PM |
| Very dark, crane cut off (tail & reflection). Lighten and recrop. :) |
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04/09/2008 04:09:16 PM |
| Too dark, but a very nice idea. Lighten it up a bit so the swans stand out more. Perhaps cropping a bit further out so the whole reflection shows, as well. 5 |
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04/09/2008 02:04:38 PM |
| Nice idea, but you could have done with getting the swans much brighter |
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04/09/2008 01:31:15 PM |
| I like the swans. For me, if they were "swimming" on a dark blue base to suggest water it would have even greater impact or maybe not cutting off the reflection of the foreground swan. |
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04/09/2008 12:31:44 PM |
| nice origami but poor lighting, a lot more could have been done here. |
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04/09/2008 11:41:41 AM |
| Could use some better lighting, i like the cropping though |
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04/09/2008 08:28:37 AM |
| Rather dark and not much landscape |
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04/09/2008 07:05:51 AM |
| if this had been composed to show the whole reflection and may be a square format i would have given it 10 but iam giving 8 |
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04/09/2008 04:31:42 AM |
| I wish a bit more contrast - great idea |
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