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Challenge: Free Study 2008-02 (Advanced Editing VII)
Collection: Challenge Entries
Camera: Olympus C-70 / C-7000 Zoom
Location: Pittsburgh, PA
Date: Feb 28, 2008
Aperture: F/4
ISO: 80
Shutter: 1/250
Galleries: Abstract, Architecture
Date Uploaded: Feb 29, 2008

Another shot of the United Steelworkers Building, downtown Pittsburgh.

Convert from RAW. In PSP X2, levels, curves, HSL (desat), color balance, cleaned windows (softened, cloned out some spots), noise removal, resize, high-pass sharpen (overlay/4/50), JPG.

Statistics
Place: 232 out of 458
Avg (all users): 5.6689
Avg (commenters): 7.0000
Avg (participants): 5.5849
Avg (non-participants): 5.8667
Views since voting: 770
Views during voting: 209
Votes: 151
Comments: 3
Favorites: 0


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03/09/2008 08:47:27 PM
I gave this a 6. I thought the symmetry was fairly good - although to really nail a shot like this is very difficult in my opinion. The image wasn't 'strong' enough for me, for this type of image, whether that was because of the lighting, contrast, colors, not sure - just needed 'extra' to make it jump off the screen. The vertical framing seemed a bit off, perhaps a little more width, not sure. I liked the concept, but it was perhaps too close to the recent Architecture challenge for me and, as I said, had to have that little 'extra' to really grab my attention after having voted in that.
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03/09/2008 08:07:53 PM
Well, I've not had any experience shooting architect/abstracts like this but... I personally don't think it has enough interest to catch the viewer. Perhaps it could use some more color, contrast, and a more exciting composition. Excellent try though, it looks like this subject could have some good potential! :)
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/06/2008 02:48:53 PM
nice abstract, love the patterns in this one. It might be worth experimenting with different angles/framings, to get the black "line" running differently through the picture. It's good how it is though.
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