Oh! In a world of open eyed photos there comes someone with the simple but revolutionary idea of a closed eye photo. I like this shot but maybe try b/w?
Gosh, if you'd waited until the eye was open it could have been just like all the rest of the one-eye close ups! HaHa. Very sweet and soft and pretty. Nice work!
If the nose isn't going to be in focus (and I agree that it shouldn't, if the eye is to be the subject), then the cheek needs to be blurred, too, in my opinion. As it is now, they fight for attention.