Great photo and composition. The texture is great and love the colors that pop like that. I love these minimal overlays over color. Went to your site and saw the link to the model makeover, which I am going to print out for the future. That was a great portrait of the same girl by the way. I just took some of my first portraits as well with one of my friend's yesterday that I got really thrilled over.
I like the colors a lot and the texture works well.
Maybe I would've added a bit more texture on her skin...seems a bit too smooth comparing to the rest, but works well in any case! :)