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09/29/2002 08:31:00 PM |
Initial=interesting geometrics
Composition=like how the red triangle points up to the shelves above, which are also in a triangular position
Clarity (focus, details)=Starts out well from the bottom, but due to the darkness at the top, the image becomes dithered. Perhaps some lighting at the top of the shelf would eleviate this.
Exposure=fair
Interesting or Emotive=the geometrics are interesting, but the plastic bag stops my eye from continuing to the top. The other items on the shelf are fine.
I am using a this new detailed commenting method inspired by autool. (Thanks
autool!). I hope you find it more helpful than my former comments.
Thanks for submitting, and good luck! ;0)
kpb
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09/29/2002 07:41:00 PM |
| I think I see where you were going here, but the clutter on the shelves distracts from the patterning. |
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09/27/2002 09:38:00 PM |
| I feel like I'm looking at two different photos here. The severe contrast between the top and bottom just confuses me. My eyes keep darting from one to the other. |
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09/26/2002 08:03:00 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background5,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing6,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 6,
Total Averaged Rating6. Autool
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09/26/2002 03:03:00 PM |
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09/26/2002 07:44:00 AM |
| Cetainly a unique angle but seems a little dark and the plastic bag takes away from that interesting angle. |
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09/25/2002 10:16:00 AM |
| I am rating this shot lower becuase this scene is not specific to your corner of the world. I can see the same setting here is CA. More planning and better positioning/lighting could have made this a better shot. 6 |
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09/25/2002 01:50:00 AM |
| Guess I wish the bottom 1/3 of this pic went away... I like the top 2/3 very much. 6 sjgleah |
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09/24/2002 07:09:00 PM |
| Interesting shelves, is that a chinese checkers board at the bottom? The flash is reflecting off the far side of that board, that isn't good. 6 Swash |
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09/23/2002 12:17:00 PM |
| I like I would have liked this better if the board game had been cropped off. Really like the angle on the shelves. |
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09/23/2002 08:37:00 AM |
| meets the challenge... otherwise, i don't find anything particularly interesting in this image... maybe I am missing something? - jmsetzler |
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09/23/2002 08:26:00 AM |
| WAY too busy, and the horizontal lines, along with the angles drives the eye NUTS, IMHO. It looks like two photos, or a composition or ... I'm not sure what, but it hurts to look at it. |
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09/23/2002 12:45:00 AM |
| Interesting composition, that's for certain! I would have liked it a little better without the stuff on the shelves, though. |
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