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01/11/2008 05:08:07 PM |
| You are a head turner that's for sure. My favorite of the bunch as it seems to catch a lot of emotion from you. |
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01/11/2008 03:29:41 PM |
| I like it, you have a beautiful smile and it looks like you are having fun. The lighting is throwing some harsh shadows but you have something to work on. |
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01/11/2008 03:13:11 PM |
| Really beautiful smile in this one. |
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01/11/2008 02:57:25 PM |
| In all of these, the obvious shadow on the backdrop does not work well. Same here. I agree that the pose works a little better, but issues like the shadow, the marks on the backdrop that do not enhance but detract, and what appears to be uneven depth of focus but could be working the image in post are issues that you might want to address in later portraits. |
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01/11/2008 02:46:57 PM |
| Jamie, I really like this shot. Keep up the good work. |
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01/11/2008 02:03:53 PM |
| This is the best one. The focus is good here. I would have cropped the right hand off it and left more neg space to the left. The harsh shadows aren't very nice to look at but at least there is some definition to the body and face around the chin. I think this could be a great picture with a bit more work, or even with just a black background, then the shadows won't matter at all. |
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01/11/2008 02:01:35 PM |
| This one I like. I tend to like "perky", and this one has lots of perky. Looks like you are throwing your head back and giggling. The lighting is a bit harsh, perhaps you need some screens or reflectors to soften it? I'm not knowledgeable in that particular area. |
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