I'm sure this has more value to you, the photographer, but I wouldn't expect it to do too well here. More even lighting might help to take away the shadowing on the left wall. Rotating the image a little clockwise would also better frame the shot. Overall this appears to me like a snapshot, which isn't necessarily negative, but isn't all that interesting to an audience.
this is a cute idea, the photo lacks technical quality. Flash makes image cold, when it really is warm and cozy...use a flood,sun or flashlight, it makes for a more diffused glow