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12/03/2007 10:05:19 AM |
| Have your model put her tongue on the roof of her mouth when she smiles. She has a beautiful smile and it's an excellent portrait, but there is a little too much of her upper gum showing above her teeth. Her tongue on the roof of her mouth will alleviate this and you will have an awesome shot. |
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12/01/2007 07:51:07 AM |
| Focus is just on the fringe and slightly off on the eyes which kills this for me. Whites of eyes have a red colour cast, lipstick on teeth and multiple catch lights on eyes. Green colour is not of the same order of saturation as the red and so is a little unbalanced. Well composed though. Questionable border - would have been better to have used the same green colour as the average green in the image rather than RGB 0, 255, 0 |
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11/30/2007 12:30:37 PM |
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11/29/2007 04:59:11 PM |
| catchy shot. I'd really love to see what this looks like with the aperture stopped down a little more to bring more of her face and smile in focus. |
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11/29/2007 06:40:51 AM |
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11/28/2007 07:53:58 PM |
| I wish the green was a little more intense. Nice shot though! |
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11/28/2007 09:47:18 AM |
| Wish the eyes stood out more. |
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