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The White Family
The White Family
Shea927


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Challenge: Group Portrait (Advanced Editing V*)
Camera: Nikon D80
Lens: Nikon AF Zoom-Nikkor 70-300mm f/4.0-5.6G
Location: Huntington Beach, OH
Date: Sep 29, 2007
Aperture: 4.0
ISO: 140
Shutter: 1/500
Galleries: Nature, Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Oct 1, 2007

 Taken on a day that was WAY too sunny for me. Cute family, but I know this picture is no where near the quality it should be. Oh well... only entering because I haven't entered anything in so long.

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Place: 52 out of 86
Avg (all users): 5.3594
Avg (commenters): 5.6250
Avg (participants): 5.1818
Avg (non-participants): 5.3798
Views since voting: 856
Views during voting: 483
Votes: 320
Comments: 24
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10/09/2007 05:38:49 PM
nice family portrait but it appears as if there is some jpeg artifacts in the image.
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 10/09/2007 07:54:35 AM
sweet a reflectormight have given you a little better light on the faces
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 10/09/2007 05:49:14 AM
Nice family portrait. A flash to bring out better detail faces would be good.
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 10/08/2007 09:58:27 PM
I hope you mean white the last name and not the race. It lacks some focus
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 10/08/2007 07:09:15 PM
a nice portrait that would of benefitted with more light thrown onto the subjects. you have a very bright background here so using a reflector would of been a great idea here. 6
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 10/08/2007 06:09:16 PM
colors seem a little washed out but great pose
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 10/08/2007 10:18:45 AM
Nice shot.

Your subjects look a little out of focus tho. Maybe the focus is good, but my attention is drawn to the background instead of your subjects. Since the viewer's eyes are drawn to the most lit areas, your intended subject (the people) don't become the main focus.

Of course, if that was your intent (have the backgroud brighter than your subject), then please disregard.

Good luck.
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 10/08/2007 01:22:40 AM
Needs to be sharper.
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 10/07/2007 11:02:26 PM
Could use some fill flash to brighten up the faces.
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 10/07/2007 05:19:37 PM
Nice idea, it just seems a little out of focus.
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 10/06/2007 08:46:07 PM
Bonus points for actually being a portrait.
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 10/05/2007 10:08:45 PM
try a boarder and adjusting the contrast
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 10/05/2007 05:16:47 PM
The fact that they sit back to the sun caused problem with the shadows on their faces. Besides very nice family portrait and the little guy's expression is just great :)
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 10/05/2007 01:13:19 PM
Good family group shot. Additional fill flash to light the subjects would help light the faces even more, they are a bit too shaded still for my tastes.
The expression on the little ones face is precious.
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 10/05/2007 09:04:03 AM
I like it. Nice intimite group composition and subtle blur in the background. Bit of a pitty that the background is so much lighter than your subjects, why did you put them in the shade? (6)
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 10/05/2007 12:07:10 AM
The colors seem a bit washed out for advanced editing. Good portrait.
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 10/04/2007 10:13:47 PM
The(your?) daughter is adorable, as is the rest of the family.

The contrast is nice and the colours are warm. It is a nice family shot I hope it does well here.
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 10/04/2007 09:49:13 PM
I'm sure this is a great family picture and the pose is good, but it has some shortcomings in exposure and sharpness as a challenge entry. It's hard to get a good exposure when the subject is in the shade and the background is in full sun.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 10/03/2007 10:44:15 AM
A legtimate portrait but the lighting is really hurting this shot. I'd have used fill flash. Might work great in BW and an adjustment of channel mixer in monotone to lighten their faces. Not meaning to be harsh, but.....
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 10/03/2007 06:59:55 AM
The kid looks ready to rumble... :-) Nice family portrait.
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 10/03/2007 02:24:26 AM
Not enough light on the beautiful family and too much in the background.
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 10/03/2007 01:36:53 AM
A little more light on them would have been nice. It's a sweet shot.
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 10/03/2007 01:01:58 AM
I think your daughter is a budding model ... she looks like she is striking a pose for the camera with attitude lol Great family portrait but a little on the shady side and a slighty greater dof would help. The man is slightly blurred.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 10/03/2007 12:33:08 AM
Wonderful image! A touch of fill light and this would be perfect. She is a little ham and is stealing the show.
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