Challenge:Garage Art (Basic Editing I) Camera:Minolta DiMAGE Z1 Location: Arizona in home Date: Feb 3, 2004 Aperture: 3.5 ISO: 100 Shutter: 1/3s Date Uploaded: Feb 3, 2004
There's too much black space on the left. More would have been effective as negative space and less would have made the composition feel more balanced, I think.
cuttuing off all the parts seems unnecessary, considering the huge amount of negative space you have on the left (or could have stepped back/zoomed out slightly).
I feel the cropping in this image is too tight. space around the tools would be effective, or perhaps the opposite, more extreme cropping, but just snipping cropping is rarely effective. Perhaps a little dark. The image also seems very weighted to the right side. There isnothing leading or contrasting the empty space on the left. If even one wrench was stretching over there a bit more it would help.