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02/10/2004 03:55:59 PM |
| Greetings from the critique club! I missed this one when looking through the Zodiac challenge - first impression, I like it very much. Looking a little closer, I have to agree with many of your commenters - the shadow of the back twin is really needs to go. I'm thinking that a little bit of backlighting (just off to the side) and behind the back figure might have eliminated the shadow and allowed for a little more sharpness for that figure as well. Overall, I think the exposure was very well done (better than most of my indoor shots!) and I'm surprised that this didn't do better! |
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02/03/2004 08:47:49 PM |
| Not always true.. at least not for me & my twin.. but I digress... nice shot & subject. Good DOF & composition. 8 |
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02/03/2004 04:58:51 AM |
| Thoughtful composition and representation. |
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02/02/2004 02:50:52 PM |
| The shadow of the back shadow is a bit too strong - otherwise a good image. |
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01/29/2004 07:52:00 AM |
| Rather than shadow the twin is out of focus also cutting off the feet from the front figure is unkind :) |
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01/28/2004 11:41:27 PM |
| Great exposure and focus. Like the color and texture as well. Nicely done! |
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01/28/2004 10:51:49 AM |
| Great DOF usage. Good theme exploration. I had an issue about the shadow behind the black piece. To me this shadow must be removed. Using a second light on the background you can do it. Or simple put the objects more distant of background. |
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01/28/2004 10:22:02 AM |
| May lack a litle sharpness. Otherwise technically well done and good idea. Also good tonal balance. |
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01/28/2004 03:04:19 AM |
where is the zodiac connection? U think I am missing the point
otherwise a cool title - goes with the image 5 |
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01/28/2004 01:55:42 AM |
| this would have been better had the focus been on. cropping a bit tight on the bottom. |
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01/28/2004 12:32:32 AM |
I know how he feels : (
Neat idea! |
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