Nice portrait. Something about the neck and the unnatural position of it throws off the balance. It seems like her head is shifted off the neck just a little bit to the right. Also, I have the feeling that she's looking through me, not at me, if you know what I mean. Actually, she looks like she hasn't settled down yet, like she's suspended in mid ear while readjusting her pose.
I'm stuck at the pose, you may say.
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