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"surrounding space of subject to create the WOW of the photograph."
"surrounding space of subject to create the WOW of the photograph."
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Challenge: Negative Space III (Basic Editing)
Camera: Pentax K10D
Lens: Sigma 18-50mm f/2.8 EX DC for Pentax
Location: Inside an old air plane
Date: Jun 13, 2007
Aperture: F2.8
ISO: 280
Shutter: 1/180"
Galleries: Portraiture, Black and White
Date Uploaded: Jun 19, 2007

Inside an old air plane.

Statistics
Place: 217 out of 374
Avg (all users): 5.3641
Avg (commenters): 5.9286
Avg (participants): 5.3205
Avg (non-participants): 5.3962
Views since voting: 832
Views during voting: 364
Votes: 184
Comments: 16
Favorites: 2 (view)


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/26/2007 05:49:47 PM
lol nice title. cool idea too. technically though, the hands are cut of, and the background is quite a bit brighter than your subject (but i know, you can't help that)
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06/25/2007 07:52:09 PM
I don't get wow from that bg but okay. Is that a plane? Where is she? IMO the wow of this shot is her beauty and the lighting on her. 5
  Photographer found comment helpful.
06/25/2007 02:23:17 PM
A very unusual, but neat backdrop for your model. She's maybe a little too centered for my tastes, but a very excellent photo with some excellent b&w tones!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
06/24/2007 10:05:52 PM
The "subject" has lots of WOW!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
06/24/2007 05:09:21 PM
Not liking the dead center look.
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06/24/2007 04:07:21 PM
The surrounding space is cluttered, and so, distracts.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
06/23/2007 01:26:08 PM
The horizon is crooked and the title is ridiculous. But it's a good clear shot, your model is well posed, and the black-and-white works well.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
06/22/2007 03:53:37 AM
maybe a little tuch of light in the face would make it perfect...
but it deserves to win anyway!
10
  Photographer found comment helpful.
06/21/2007 10:28:22 PM
yeah, that's in the description, but that's not what negative space means. this photo has no negative space. and even if it did, it's too symmetrical.

...I see you marked my comment helpful. Very kind of you. I think I was too harsh, and definitely voted too low. I'm kind of biased against the "Larus" look that this photo has. I actually thought this photo would place much higher, but I think other people had trouble sensing negative space as well.

keep shooting!

Message edited by author 2007-06-28 00:35:44.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
06/21/2007 10:40:43 AM
nah, she's the wow
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06/20/2007 10:34:14 PM
Perhaps a little too much explanation, and a little much going on in the "negative" space. Still, a creative shot.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
06/20/2007 04:46:36 PM
finally someone who understood the challenge lol :) 7
  Photographer found comment helpful.
06/20/2007 12:30:41 PM
Your title sucks (sorry for my rudeness, but I did not find an appropriate word). It's also a pity that there's quite a sharp background, because it takes a bit away from the WOW effect of the surrounding. It's still a very good portrait!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
06/20/2007 09:29:45 AM
Looks like the inside of a military aircraft.. too small to be a C-130. Maybe a KC-9? Surprised you were able to get your girlfriend/wife/s.o. or daughter into the aircraft. As far as the challenge goes, the space around her isn't negative space in the strictest sense, because it's so busy. An interesting attempt to be different though.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
06/20/2007 06:09:40 AM
There's no wow for me
06/20/2007 01:31:11 AM
i think the wow is the beautiful girl! 8
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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