From the critique club:
I really like the idea here.
The action is good, it certainly meets the challenge.
Some things that I would change though...
the background is distracting. The picture frame(?) and crocked black line are distracting and take my eye away from the subject.
I'm not sure if you used a tripod here, but the background looks a little blurry which would indicate you might not have.
A tripod and shorter exposure maybe would have helped.
It was a cool, original idea though.
Terry
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