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07/04/2007 12:10:37 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
A very effective photo. And a nice demonstration of how breaking photography "rules" can contribute to a photo's appeal. The large burned out spot would be too distracting in most photos, but here it becomes the focal point that ties everything together. And nothing here is in really sharp focus, another common photo killer. But the spherical forms are apparent and the lack of focus suggests chaos rather than carelessness.
But other rules are followed and lend stability and order that hold the viewer's interest. The bright spot has a great rule-of-thirds placement. The tones are nicely balanced, with the predominantly dark tones offsetting the few very bright ones. And the implied diagonal lines emanating from the center make this really dynamic.
I have two complaints about the photo. First, I wish it was more squareish. The 2:1 ratio seems a bit flat; I think a 4:3 would work better. Second, I really don't like the white border. It just doesn't work with the dark edges of the photo. And it puts a boundary on the "universe". I think it would work better with no border at all. Even if you printed this photo to hang it on a wall, I think it would work best flush-mounted on a board rather than framed! |
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06/27/2007 06:32:11 AM |
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06/27/2007 02:53:13 AM |
| Melted plastic? Okay ya gotta give now the challenge is over and I'm trying to figure out how many I got right/wrong. |
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06/26/2007 11:25:58 PM |
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06/26/2007 06:18:31 PM |
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06/25/2007 08:45:25 PM |
| A glass ball with bubbles embedded in it, lit from behind? |
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06/25/2007 10:23:33 AM |
| Neat...is it a glass paper weight? |
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06/24/2007 12:58:47 AM |
| Interesting... I don't know what it is. |
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06/23/2007 08:22:51 AM |
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06/23/2007 03:25:57 AM |
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06/23/2007 02:39:19 AM |
Cool concept. I like how you've used the light source.
my guess- you broke open a couple dozen old mercury thermometers and dumped the mercury in a clear bowl of water? |
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06/23/2007 12:55:49 AM |
| some special glass or stone with air trapped inside, nice |
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06/22/2007 11:52:31 PM |
| Are we looking through hand blown glass? |
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06/22/2007 02:20:02 PM |
| Nice job!! Joy detergent with Karo syrup?? |
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06/21/2007 10:00:58 PM |
| water drops? very nice effect. |
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06/21/2007 06:57:41 PM |
| Air bubbles in some kind of glass or plastic |
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06/21/2007 01:44:34 PM |
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06/21/2007 12:30:42 PM |
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06/21/2007 08:23:41 AM |
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06/21/2007 06:55:44 AM |
| That's a very cool shot using the light. I have an almost identical paperweight |
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06/21/2007 01:12:11 AM |
| cool, looks like this was taken through glass with airbubbles in it. A paperweight maybe? |
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06/21/2007 12:08:24 AM |
| super carbonated beverage? |
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06/20/2007 10:51:18 PM |
| A paperweight? Perfect title for this wonderful macro! 10 for me! :) |
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06/20/2007 09:58:09 PM |
| one of those cool glass things with bubbles in it with a light behind it?? |
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06/20/2007 09:51:41 PM |
| this is the plastic-beaded fringe on the dimestore tiffany lamp at Madame Suzanne's palm-reading & fortune-tellling emporium? |
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06/20/2007 04:32:59 PM |
| Yep this works nicely for the concept. I like the toning and intense glow near the center. Glass ball perhaps? |
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06/20/2007 04:07:23 PM |
| Good title for this, good colour but the bright spot in the middle is a bit too bright. I guess this is a glass paperweight but I suppose it could be a bottle of shampoo or hair gel too. |
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06/20/2007 03:19:31 PM |
| seems blown...border seems to emphasize that. |
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06/20/2007 12:46:01 PM |
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06/20/2007 08:01:20 AM |
| great idea, composition. horrible, horrible colors. even in basic, you could have shifted the hues and made this into something more inviting and mystical... |
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06/20/2007 07:11:37 AM |
| Lots of bubbles in a glass something like a paperweight. Good concept. I like this one. |
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06/20/2007 02:36:41 AM |
| glass globe with air bubbles |
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