Let me see - 19 years old - this is your parents' kitchen, right?
It's a lovely kitchen either way and a nice portrait of it.
The pin cushion distortion is ok to my eye, for most of the picture, but the top cupboards on the left make vertical lines a little too close to the edge so that the distortion reads. I think I would have tried cropping that out. (I have the same lens, it's just great :))
the color version turned out too "hdr-ish", so i converted to bw.
i like it much better in bw,and when i saw the result, it kinda reminded me on some hitchcock movie...