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Extra stuff is distracting me. Maybe zoom into her with a nice portrait frame?
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Normally, a composition this centered would look static, but it seems to work here for some reason.
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it's a little disappointing not being able to focus on the girl, but otherwise this is marvelous.
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Great dof, she looks so small, the buildings look funny behind her. Good luck
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THis has a great vibe to it. I feel a bit like a stalker … very nice iamge that should score a 6.3 … it could be sharper. 7
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I like how the people on the side's frame your subject.
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cropping out the people on the left OR the right would make the picture more dynamic.
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I like this as a candid... It has feeling to it.
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Good candid shot. Gave you a 7 psart
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Lovely image love the framing of the girlby the passers by and the top of the bridge, which really draws the eye to the subject matter
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and the people split like the red sea
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Zoomed in closer would have been better...
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Image is a little too dark overall, I feel, and the background is kind of distracting. Maybe a different angle would've helped give the image a bit more much needed constrast, say lining the girl up against one of those trees instead of the very dark building.
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Nice capture but try a closer crop.
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I know you are so pleased with the gap that you shot her through, but she's so small with that big, visually heavy, bridge over her, really compositionally diminishes her. I'd recommend a much tighter crop. Her alone would negate your cool timing, no doubt, because they would be out of the frame, but would make me wonder what she was thinking, would involve me more in "her story".
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A good moment, impact lost in the large void area...
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Great job capturing her alone.
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