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Challenge: On the Edge (Classic Editing)
Camera: Olympus C-4000Z
Location: my kitchen
Date: Dec 23, 2003
Aperture: f3.5
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/30
Galleries: Still Life
Date Uploaded: Dec 23, 2003

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Statistics
Place: 141 out of 164
Avg (all users): 4.1485
Avg (commenters): 4.5000
Avg (participants): 3.8701
Avg (non-participants): 4.3200
Views since voting: 765
Votes: 202
Comments: 20
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12/30/2003 05:08:39 PM
Would rather had the cut apple wedge in focus. Took me a moment to even understand what it all was. Great idea, though.
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12/30/2003 04:52:31 PM
I love the idea, would liked to have seen the piece of apple a little more in focus as it's a hard photo to look at.
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12/30/2003 01:12:05 PM
I like this shot very much, but I think this may have worked better with just a little bit more depth of field - maybe enough so that more of the blade and perhaps the chunk of apple was in focus with the rest blurred. As it is, it looks more out of focus than anything else beacuse the tip of the knife is not prominent enough to stand by itself as the focus of the image. I like the composition though.
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12/29/2003 11:57:40 AM
main subject is too out of focus...
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12/28/2003 10:36:47 PM
A very clever play on the subject. Well conceived and executed. I like how the edje starts in focus and then blurs into the apple slice.
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12/28/2003 05:39:28 PM
I fnd this a rather interesting photo. I like the unsharp apple coupled with the sharp edge of the razor.....at first I almost wanted to say the apple was too out of focus and I found it distracting, but now think it is the apect that intrigues me the most...
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12/27/2003 08:58:15 PM
Great perspective.
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12/27/2003 02:53:08 PM
object on the edge is out of focus, could have been better if it had a better focus, good idea though
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12/27/2003 12:04:24 PM
It's hard to tell that the focus is on the very tip of the knife.
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12/26/2003 05:48:26 PM
your shot could be greatly improved with an adjustment to the white balance. there is a greenish hue to everything that could be fixed.
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12/26/2003 08:03:21 AM
Good idea. I wish there was a greater DOF.
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12/25/2003 02:03:41 PM
Unfocused. This would have been a very nice shot with more DOF
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12/25/2003 07:46:56 AM
I would prefer more focus on the apple.
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12/24/2003 09:53:58 PM
Like the composition but this photo would have been much more dynamic with an improved depth of field. Also looks a little grainy...maybe a lower ISO with a longer exposure would do the trick.
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12/24/2003 12:16:13 PM
I would have made the apple slice on the knife the central focus. The greenish tint does nothing for me.
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12/24/2003 11:59:51 AM
I'd have focused on there the apple meest the knife. That seems to be where you want to draw the viewers eye. As is, too much of the photo is out of focus.
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12/24/2003 09:30:03 AM
I can see a big shot here. Only one issue concerning the light, here. It seems to be umbalanced with the white. Try to se other white balance options or put more light in the shot.
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12/24/2003 02:27:59 AM
Nice photo... Personally, I would like to see a little more in focus... but it certainly conveys "on the edge".
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12/24/2003 01:14:22 AM
Too bad the focus is on the tip of the knife and not on the slice of apple...
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12/24/2003 12:14:52 AM
i like the theme and composition of this shot, but the color cast feels a bit awkward.
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