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05/26/2007 03:15:19 PM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: Nice focus and great tonal range. You did lose some interest with the pixelated sky. Other than that, I like what you achieved here.
Lighting: Your lighting is strong. While there is a bit of a hot spot up in the sky, the remainder of the frame is nicely lit.
Composition/Content: I like the tilt you added here. While tilts aren't normally my preference, it really adds a feeling of movement to this capture.
My Opinion: Not bad, but the sky needed some work. Nice use of tilt and composition to make an interesting image.
Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric
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05/24/2007 12:20:03 PM |
I totally missed the vanishing point in this during the challenge. I kept looking to the farm on the left wondering if the fence was supposed to be the vanishing point and that didn't really do it. Then I wondered if there was some deeper philosophical point I was missing, like farms are vanishing, etc...
Never looked INSIDE the bus for it. Now I see it! :D
Too clever for your own good on this one Skip. :P |
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05/24/2007 10:29:26 AM |
| Quite a photo with a sense of desolation. For once, could not bring myself to vote on any of the photos in this challenge. Too many and too dispiriting. However, this is an inspiring one. Also, for me, interesting to see that lens in action. |
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05/24/2007 10:13:44 AM |
| You was robbed - you didn't get a Posthumous comment. I suggest you request one immediately! And very nice shot, both for this challenge and otherwise. |
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05/22/2007 11:19:34 PM |
| This is making me dizzy... |
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05/20/2007 07:18:28 PM |
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05/20/2007 12:37:57 AM |
| It is a little grainy. The clouds dont look right. imo. |
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05/19/2007 04:31:09 PM |
| I like the angle this is shot from. |
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05/19/2007 12:27:58 PM |
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05/18/2007 04:43:08 PM |
| i love the gritty urban feel. however, i feel it should be slightly more centred. 9 |
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05/18/2007 06:11:13 AM |
| I like it. I like the angle (which some will hate), I like the converging lines of the windowframe, and I like the farmland which reflects the type of face the woman has - she's of this country, it seems. |
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05/17/2007 01:57:41 PM |
| this has such a nice retro feel to it. very good!! |
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05/16/2007 09:33:01 PM |
| The sky doesn't look quite right and I don't think it meets the challenge very well, but what a wonderful composition! |
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05/16/2007 10:02:40 AM |
| Angle is very dynamic, lighting is good in and out of the bus; you've got posterization in the sky that hurts you a lot. |
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05/16/2007 09:11:05 AM |
| This one is very cool, a different approach to the train or tracks, or is it a bus? My eyes are drawn more to the farm, but I will give an 8 for a great shot. |
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05/16/2007 08:37:00 AM |
| I find the tilt unnerving to view. |
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05/16/2007 07:33:13 AM |
| interesting take on the challenge - the skewed perspective and the woman looking out the window tells an interesting story |
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05/16/2007 01:18:38 AM |
| nice shot but where is the Vanishing point? |
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