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05/07/2007 08:55:45 AM |
| I have to agree whole-heartedly with Colorcarnival's assessment. This portrait of you really does look like a photo for the book jacket of your next book especially against the backdrop of the shelved books in the background. I would NEVER have thought of utilizing the light from a laptop to illuminate the subject but you have done an excellent job here! The side lighting on the one side of your face subtly focuses attention to where you have posed your hand in a position that projects the contemplative mood of the subject. My only critique is that in small areas of your hand and the top part of the forehead it is a little overexposed and detail is lost - a little use of the burning tool to tone down the blown out areas should work nicely. |
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05/06/2007 10:57:34 AM |
| this is excellent. looks like a photo you'd see on the cover of an author's novel. (oh especially with all the books in the background lol) Love the lighting. The only thing I think should be done differently is that the lighting is over-emphasizeing the part on the left side of your face that is being pushed up by your hand. To me the lighting makes it look like you have put too much force on that side and it kind of detracts from the natural lines of the rest of your face. |
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05/05/2007 12:10:26 PM |
| (#9?) Aristotle appears to be prominent on the shelf. They appear to be in order according to Mortimer Adler, dof makes it difficult to tell for sure. Composite or no, you have some good taste. Ha. Excellent. |
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05/04/2007 11:39:50 PM |
| looks almost reagal...i like it |
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05/04/2007 07:47:33 PM |
This is very weird Ken.
Very good, but very weird. |
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05/04/2007 07:31:53 PM |
| I can see that you are contemplating future evils. Those books don't fool me. |
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05/04/2007 06:56:01 PM |
The lighting is awesome! I love this kind of portrait where one side is light and the other is shadowed.
Very nice!
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05/04/2007 05:58:33 PM |
| excellent .. love the pensive and just about intelligent look ... (probably hard to achieve, so congrats on that ..!.:)) ... i really like how you are in a room full of books, it makes this portrait meaningful .. the contrasts are excellent and the darkness just adds to that pensive quality .. |
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05/04/2007 01:33:54 PM |
Originally posted by UNCLEBRO:
are they all your photoshop "how to" books behind you? |
Uh, yeah. Yeah, early photoshop series: Plato, Socrates, Pascal, Aristotle, Chaucer - all the masters of Photoshop BC. ;-) |
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05/04/2007 09:48:25 AM |
| I think the laptop light is great, just wish you hadn't pushed the skin up near your eye. |
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05/04/2007 09:37:35 AM |
| In a way, it almost looks like someone came in with a camera and got your attention. Like you were deep in thought and just raised your eyes up to look at the camera. Very nice. |
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05/04/2007 08:38:48 AM |
| Ken, you have such a pleasant look about you, here. There is a wisdom - oh maybe it's the books. (tee hee). I like the hand. The lighting is on the verge of harsh - I dig it. |
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05/04/2007 07:50:43 AM |
Look into my eyes....You WILL learn the nefarious black art of photoshop
Really like this shot (certainly my favourite in the challenge to date) and excellent self portrait, with beautiful lighting tones and contrasts and the bookcase background works brilliantly for the pose
Possible tweaks I would consider would be to get rid of the label on the cuff, which for some reason really attracts the eye away from what you should be looking at. Possibly also lose the watch, although the (I'm guessing) canvas strap actually works quite well with the (corduroy?) material of your top and if the label disappears then it may be fine to keep it
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05/04/2007 07:47:52 AM |
I like what I see, and the serious side of you is quite handsome.
Your talant is amazing and I love the contrast of the light and shade on the face and hand. A strong composition, well balanced, and in all, a great portrait of you Master Ken. |
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05/04/2007 07:18:25 AM |
| You know it's actually weird looking at you on a serious note. |
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05/04/2007 06:46:35 AM |
very studious.
are they all your photoshop "how to" books behind you? |
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05/04/2007 06:26:46 AM |
| nice image...the books make a great background. |
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05/04/2007 05:59:58 AM |
| thanks for the excellent and simple tip on interesting portrature lighting. This image is really solid - I love the light reflections off the books in the library behind you. |
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05/04/2007 05:52:31 AM |
laptops make great front lighting unless you wanna shoot for colour.
Good self portrait, as you know, if you get the lighting right, there is very little need for editing. |
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