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05/03/2007 08:27:00 PM |
Hi there from the Critique Club
I think that I'll echo some of the comments already offered here. It is hard to find your area of focus here, and the kitchenware is obscured and overwhelmed by the presence of the strawberry. I see the idea; I just think that the execution could have been a little better. Perhaps pulling back a bit to show us more of the wisp would have given a better sense of meeting the challenge. The colored border is also a bit of a distraction. While I am a fan of borders, I think color competes with the subject, no matter what the photo. The principles of matting and framing just don't apply the same to the computer screen.
Eric |
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04/26/2007 09:54:19 PM |
| Good composition, but strawberry is not crisp |
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04/25/2007 01:02:23 PM |
| I know what kitchenware it is, but the image is really more about the berry than the whisk. |
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04/25/2007 12:28:35 PM |
| To me this is focusing more on the food rather than the kitchenware |
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04/23/2007 08:33:08 PM |
| Your main subject is food, not kitchenware. |
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04/23/2007 12:49:29 AM |
| I'm not one of the DNMC nazi's that's gonna hold this against you, but honestly, because of your focus the subject of this seems to be the strawberry rather than the wisk. |
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