Let me start off by congratulating you on your first 6+ score. Way to go!!! Now for the reason I’m here, critique your Rule of Thirds entry. This is one of those images where the technicals are pretty solid except for the lighting being a little harsh on the models chest. The hair does convey the motion indicated by your title nicely; however, the models facial expression doesn’t look comfortable. Then there is negative space on the left side of the image. This is one of those things where some people will love it and some won’t. I think you could have removed most of it and kept the model’s eyes in the rule of thirds node very easily. Would that have improved your score? If so, not by much. You have a very strong entry here, as shown by the score you received. I can see you will be a force to be recognized in future challenges. Congratulations.
Please let me know if you have any questions regarding this critique.
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