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12/19/2003 06:36:33 PM |
Greetings from the Critique club
I think this is a really fine product shot.
With the december rules you could have removed the shading in the lower left and the right side that would have given this the perfect crisp appearance.
I think you have the DOF spot on. I really wouldn't want it shallower. This way you can make out the details of the entire object, but still be focused on the leading edge.
Possibly a little more room to the left, the crop is a tad tight.
Very good work, imo.
JC |
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12/14/2003 09:30:26 PM |
Good clean photo-- I like the the choice of depth |
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12/13/2003 11:18:34 PM |
Nice crisp contrasty image. I think it cold be improved with a more difffuse light source to soften the shadow.
I think you'll get plenty of questions as to how you did the ³ in the title! |
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12/13/2003 10:14:35 PM |
I like the capture of the metallic textures. I think a bit more depth of field would improve this shot as the colored panel could lead the viewer more into the picture. |
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12/10/2003 06:01:42 PM |
I like your creative choice of DOF. I think the shadow helps ground the shot and add some balance. Nicely done |
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12/10/2003 12:07:04 PM |
I would have liked this better with a greater DoF, bringing the entire subject into focus. |
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12/09/2003 11:19:37 PM |
you have the same player as me! |
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12/09/2003 12:53:37 AM |
Crystal clear image nice shape |
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12/08/2003 09:14:26 AM |
A little reflection on the front edge is distracting.
The crisp chrome would have look nicer on a very white background. The background is not evenly blown out, but it is good none the less. |
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12/08/2003 06:37:39 AM |
Nice idea, to much DOF for me, overall a nice shot. |
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