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Challenge: Childhood Without Children (Classic Editing)
Camera: Olympus D-510 Zoom
Location: kitchen table
Date: Aug 25, 2002
Aperture: 3.8
ISO: n/a
Shutter: 1/8
Date Uploaded: Aug 25, 2002

Isn't this the snack we all were promised by the media/culture?

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Place: 86 out of 172
Avg (all users): 5.1008
Avg (commenters): 5.6875
Avg (participants): 5.0656
Avg (non-participants): 5.1349
Views since voting: 824
Votes: 248
Comments: 18
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
08/31/2002 01:06:00 AM
this is too dark for my taste
08/29/2002 04:37:00 PM
Those cookies look delicious! I can tell that the child just left.....he'll be back to finish those. And the milk film on the glass shows he had some of that, too. What child didn't have a snack after school? Good job!!
08/29/2002 10:44:00 AM
Pretty good, lots of wasted space though. Maybe a look from closer down to the plate would have helped in two ways:
1) It may give the picture a bit of a child's point of view feel
2) Eliminate the wasted space at the bottom and in the top corners of the photo.
08/29/2002 08:43:00 AM
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background6,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing7,
Challenge: Does your entry meet it?7,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 6,
Total Averaged Rating7. Autool
08/28/2002 01:42:00 PM
Very yummy shot. Only thing missing is the soggy crumbs floating in the milk. LOL. I like the angle and the frame placement. Focus and lighting are both great for this photo. You did an excelent job keeping glare and reflection off all shiny surfaces. Congrats and good luck in the challenge.
08/28/2002 01:11:00 PM
I like the idea and the way you set this up. I just think it needs a little more focus. good take on the challenge though, 6 kdj
08/28/2002 10:06:00 AM
This is a great shot, full of the challenge and full of fun. It's technically fine, composition is good, sharp as a razor and I bet you got to eat the props after :) Playing is always more fun than eating :o) (8)
08/27/2002 11:29:00 PM
AHA! This is pretty funny because this is what my mom's cookies looked like - a little too dark for my taste. Focus on the cookies seems a tad soft.
08/27/2002 08:12:00 PM
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08/27/2002 11:28:00 AM
Interesting idea but the composition doens't excite me. Perhaps closer in?
Seems a little out of focus.
Kavey
08/27/2002 09:58:00 AM
Good composition. Nice angle. Like the pattern on the table. Cookies seem a bit soft though. Good effort.
08/27/2002 08:22:00 AM
Great Idea. Lighting is OK. The cookies seem a bit out of focus to me. 6
08/27/2002 02:26:00 AM
This is good but I think the cookies could be a little sharper. 6.
08/26/2002 09:54:00 PM
Best shot of the 'classic' (and expected) 'milk and cookies' shot I've seen so far of these challenge photos. The photographer obviously put some thought into the asthetics of this shot and did a great job. Wish the cookies were a bit more in focus though.
08/26/2002 08:15:00 PM
The cookies are a little blury
08/26/2002 08:06:00 PM
"After playtime" is much better.
08/26/2002 06:07:00 PM
Tablecloth adds nice contrast. Would be preferable if the cup and plate weren't cut off at the edges. 7.
08/26/2002 11:27:00 AM
Nice composition. Cookies are a bit OOF. Score 6 Kee


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