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Challenge: Free Study 2007-03 (Advanced Editing V)
Camera: Nikon D200
Lens: Nikon AF-S DX Zoom-Nikkor 17-55mm f/2.8G IF-ED
Location: Shopping Mall, Prim-Nevada
Date: Mar 22, 2007
Aperture: f/13
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/320
Galleries: Architecture, Textures
Date Uploaded: Mar 28, 2007

Shot this wile waiting for my wife to go shoping on our way to Las Vegas.

Place: 306 out of 561
Avg (all users): 5.5679
Avg (commenters): 7.1667
Avg (participants): 5.5798
Avg (non-participants): 5.5349
Views since voting: 767
Views during voting: 214
Votes: 162
Comments: 7
Favorites: 0

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04/14/2007 05:22:13 AM
Hi from the Critique Club!

Composition: The composition is nice but something feels wrong. It's hard to put my finger on it but it could be that while the line between the pink and blue is level, where the wall meets the ground is not, or the balanced feel the pillar and bin gives the image. In any case its not a major but a feeling. I do like the shadow of the tree leading us to the seat and the nicely deliniated colours.

Technical: Not much to say here as the image is mostly nice, simple, and clean. Maybe a bit of cloning out of things such as the "lines" on the pillar near the top or some "things" on the ground.

Feel: I like the image but the score reflects that it doesn't have a "wow" to it. In a challenge with a topic that suited it better I am sure it would score closer to or over 6.

Keep up the good work, this is a great effort for your first entry! PM me if you have any queries.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/06/2007 01:55:37 PM
Great study of light, color, and shadow.
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04/04/2007 04:53:06 AM
Right then, joke's on me as I now have to plough through 564 images and bump them all (yes, all of them) up. There'll be a third run through for fine tuning. It's day two three four now and I'm running late, sorry.

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04/03/2007 06:55:26 PM
Good eye seeing this image.
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04/03/2007 03:43:25 PM
I like it, nice simple clean lines.
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04/03/2007 03:04:58 AM
great arty shot .... excellent composition .. great colours .. =8
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04/01/2007 12:50:13 PM
I like the lines and colors in this still life.
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