Composition: You've done a good job with the composition as the subject is not centered and yet the whole frame is being used.
Technical: The DOF feels a lot shallower given you used f/5.8. This isolates the flowers well but also gives us more OOF elements than we'd perhaps like given the subject. I also feel the grain in the image is misplaced.
Feel: This is a nice flower shot but the OOF elements don't work for me.
Right then, joke's on me as I now have to plough through 564 images and bump them all (yes, all of them) up. There'll be a third run through for fine tuning. It's day two three now and I'm running late, sorry.