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08/24/2002 12:53:00 AM |
| You should enter this in the childhood challenge. I remember doing this in elementary school and then we went outside to see if they would blow in the wind. I remember it being too windy and all the windmills kind of just folded in half. Anyway...This is the only pencil windmill that I saw in this challenge, so I think you hit the mark with originality. The focus and lighting are good and the angle is ok. I might have either tried to get it exactly up and down, or more crooked. how it stands, it kind of looks like you tried to get it straight, but couldn't. Nice job and good luck in the challenge. |
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08/23/2002 01:56:00 PM |
| There's a kind of softness and subtelty to this photo that I like. |
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08/23/2002 01:24:00 PM |
| this is a good concept for this challenge... I like the use of the pencil :) I think two elements could possibly improve this shot as well... 1 - a little more light on the pinwheel to offer some higher level of contrast against the background... 2 - possibly a darker background to make the pinwheel stand out more as well.... good shot :) - jmsetzler |
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08/23/2002 01:16:00 PM |
| nice idea and shot, i can't believe i am saying this, because i chose a certain color scheme for my shot and people are asking for more color, but ... i would love to see more color in this one. maybe make the windmill part out of colored paper and lighten the background a little? -- gr8photos (5) |
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08/22/2002 08:06:00 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background5,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing4,
Challenge: Does your entry meet it?10,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 5,
Total Averaged Rating6. Autool
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08/22/2002 02:42:00 AM |
| you could have done some post processing here, increased the lights... nice concept. |
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08/21/2002 11:19:00 PM |
| lovely colors..like the high light on the pencil..pencil could be more on an angle or placed off center. |
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08/20/2002 02:59:00 PM |
| I think a different background and or pinwheel color would have made this pop. |
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08/20/2002 10:30:00 AM |
Clean and simple shapes, very geometric. A little too dim and shadowed.
Kavey |
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08/20/2002 08:50:00 AM |
| colored construction paper would've given this a bigger POW! But very good idea. |
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08/19/2002 04:59:00 PM |
| very nice. I think it needs more of contrast |
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08/19/2002 02:15:00 PM |
| A darker background would have let you have more direct light on the fan (bring the whites up more) and would have made everything stand out in general. Nice shot! |
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08/19/2002 10:12:00 AM |
| Very creative shot; the very subtle lighting of this shot takes away from the impact of it, for me. I would love to see strong lighting on the subject against some kind of dark or brightly colored background. lhall |
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