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03/03/2007 09:33:51 PM |
Hi, Greetings from the Critique Club:
Composition: I understand the circumstances of which you took this image but I feel the composition could be better. The out of focus tree and the wire really diminish the photo. The wire needs to be there but if you had cropped in more the photo would have had more impact.
Technical: Again the focusing has let you down. You chose an F4 but that has made the wire more noticeable then it needs to be. You might not have been able to use flash but a bit of Shadow/Highlight should have helped in this area.
Overall: In summary, the image tells a sad story...but the composition and technicalities keeps the viewer at bay from studying the image more. |
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02/27/2007 11:10:08 AM |
| Interesting photo. I would like to have seen a little less of the cage, but nice capture anyway. |
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02/27/2007 05:16:28 AM |
| DNMC... Your photo doesn't show hate... Just your title |
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02/26/2007 09:36:14 AM |
Leopards are brilliant creatures.
I dont know how much justice this picture does to it tho.
the Cage framing the animal doesnt do it for me.
Just reminds me about those poor animals stuck there (N) |
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02/23/2007 02:02:06 PM |
| nothing about this except the title conveys the idea of "hate." |
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02/22/2007 07:27:57 PM |
| Nicely framed within the cage and great dof, however, I'm not exactly feeling hate from the creature. Actually, I'd say it looks more content than anything else :) |
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02/22/2007 03:55:16 PM |
| I hate humans too. Lousy beatnicks. |
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02/21/2007 01:12:05 PM |
| I like the idea with this shot. Good focus on the tiger, although the trees are somewhat distracting. Making the fence lines parallel to the X and Y axis of the photo would have helped as well. This is an emotive shot that just needs a bit of technical improvement to boost it up to a GREAT photo. |
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02/21/2007 12:42:17 PM |
| WOnderful focus, though the composition is a little confusing and busy. The colors are also nice! |
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02/21/2007 12:18:49 PM |
| i like this picture the jaguar is really cool; i like the way you included the bars in the photo it adds the element of line in the photo |
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02/21/2007 09:22:54 AM |
| he should hate humans indeed |
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02/21/2007 08:10:32 AM |
| too sleepy for hate. bars are distracting |
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02/21/2007 12:14:28 AM |
| You should try getting as close as possible to fences. It helps blur them out of the picture. |
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