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Simply Veg
Simply Veg
Axleuk


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Fruits and Vegetables II (Advanced Editing V)
Camera: Canon EOS-D60
Lens: Canon EF 28-90mm f/4-5.6 II USM (Black)
Location: Ynysawdre, South Wales, UK
Date: Feb 10, 2007
Aperture: f/4.5
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/10
Galleries: Still Life
Date Uploaded: Feb 10, 2007

Not a lot of time to deal with this one.

Light was simply a torch held above the camera, the backdrop was a pair of black trousers.

Crop, colour match, levels and USM

First entry to be voted on and i am a little excited as i have only been using a camera for about 3 weeks now.

Good luck everyone.

Statistics
Place: 232 out of 346
Avg (all users): 5.2934
Avg (commenters): 5.0000
Avg (participants): 5.1827
Avg (non-participants): 5.4762
Views since voting: 606
Views during voting: 228
Votes: 167
Comments: 7
Favorites: 0


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03/02/2007 06:03:02 PM
Count me as one that would like either more DOF or less objects in the picture. Your detail on the shroom is good and you might play around with some tighter cropping.
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03/02/2007 06:02:20 PM
I gave this a 5. I like the subject and the DOF is fine. The lighting on the mushroom and onion is good, the other white veg could use a little more detail. I think it would be improved by moving it all off center and not cropping so close to the top of the onion.
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03/02/2007 11:49:32 AM
I like the low DOF, but it feels like it could use just a little more light. Maybe a fill to cut down on some hard shadow.

The subject matter is interesting. I wish you'd cropped in the top of the onion.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
02/18/2007 01:34:44 PM
simply beautifulllllll... 9
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02/12/2007 11:12:20 AM
personally, I would crop this shot differently ... not cut off the top of the onion ... and take away some of the negative space on the sides ...
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02/12/2007 10:23:43 AM
the composition is slightly tight at the top and bottom.. I think the lighting is good but maybe not sharp enough in the middle..
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02/12/2007 09:13:28 AM
I think the lighting is good. I might've done it in the portrait orientation with more neg space beneath the mushroom. I'd up the selective color: black so that the background is a bit more solid.
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