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			|  | 11/29/2003 10:14:54 AM | 
		| | Greetings from the Critique Club :) 
 This composition is fairly plain with no particular elements of strength.  The background seems to be a bit contrasty as well.  I think a closer composition that removed the background completely would work best in this case.
 
 This shot is also out of focus.  I think that was probably one of two major contributors to the score being on the low side of average.  The second contributor is that I believe you missed the theme of the challenge.
 
 Flower photography is something that I hope to get better at.  I have been practicing with it and making a few strong photos.  It's about like working with any other subject... look for interesting angles and something that is not your normal point of view...
 
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| Comments Made During the Challenge  | 
		
			|  | 11/20/2003 09:34:48 AM | 
		| | Pretty shot. I'd like it better with enough depth of field for the bottom leaves to be in focus. | 
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			|  | 11/17/2003 09:25:04 PM | 
		| | lovely colors.  that yellow really glows out of the pink.  I like having the green out of focus but I wish all of the flower was sharp.  Also a bit more contrast? | 
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			|  | 11/17/2003 11:39:40 AM | 
		| | This seems very soft to me without having the mood set by a deliberate soft focus. The colors are good, doesnt appear to have any blown out hightlight, contrast isnt bad, and it nicely fills the frame. I think the major flaw is that it is just not sharp enough and thus loses quite an impact. | 
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			|  | 11/17/2003 10:00:12 AM | 
		| | Its out of focus, a little dull and for a flower, its same old same old. Maybe if you used different lighting and took it at an interesting angle | 
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