Taken in my room. Edited the brightness and contrast a bit. The reason i chose sleep is no matter what you are, or what you do, you always need sleep! Sleep is always a good thing!
Post Challenge:
I really liked this photo, but it being my first ever challenge entry, i can see what I needed to change:
1. The focus was out, because I was using a timer and it focused on the ground instead of the bed.
2. Should have cropped out the floor. After all the comments I have recieved on DPC, i have noticed that almost everyone hates my shag carpet..except me. So i need to keep that in mind.
3. Too bright, needed to keep the tones down.
Thats all I have to say!
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Sleep is awesome. I try to get as much of it as I can! Thanks for posting to the Take Your Shame thread -- I bet if you did this shot again using your comments received as a guide it would rock the DPC world! :)
For the subject and title, the light is too bright. If you shoot it in the dimmed light you would've achieved better mood. The connection to the challenge is clear. I wish you took it from a different angle, to avoid the carpet.
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