Strictly speaking, the syllable count should be 5-7-5., but I know that when people don't write haiku in Japanese they use a different syllable count. ;-P
Your focus seems to be on the red rather than the leaf with the droplets. I think you're also a little too close. While technically this is probably minimalism I think it would have more impact if you were to pull back a little to allow the leaf and pod to relax. (If that makes sense, heh)
I think this is definately worth a reshoot. It has the potential to be a very pleasant photograph.
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