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11/18/2003 06:24:36 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
This white-on-white piece really catches my eye. Your focus is just soft enough to give the whole piece a sort of cloudy feel (very appropriate given your subject). Compositionally, I think you have done a good job of breaking up the monotony of a centered subject by roting it just a bit, so the heads of the angels are nicely staggered.
I think I would like this just a little better if there were slightly more contrast between the angels and your background. Other than that, fantastic! |
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11/12/2003 10:42:37 PM |
Great job on this one, Mom! Another finish in the 5's!! Congrats!
JD |
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11/11/2003 11:00:58 PM |
| Pretty nice white on white-- |
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11/11/2003 06:54:44 PM |
| cool white on white. nice definition on the angels - a bit sharper? (I'm saying this a lot , maybe I need new glasses) |
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11/11/2003 02:56:24 PM |
| Nice idea. Good composition and lighting. Nice black & whtie effect. 8. |
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11/08/2003 02:56:19 PM |
| White on white.... Nice idea... well realized too. 9 |
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11/07/2003 02:35:58 PM |
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11/06/2003 02:16:14 PM |
| Very nice white on white image. Good light and composition. |
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11/06/2003 09:21:02 AM |
| like the idea of this and the photography, feel that the piece should have been rotated a bit CCW as the front angel is to flat and should be more angular (or is that angeler?....sorry couldn't resist) |
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11/06/2003 02:08:07 AM |
| great idea..... white on white..... |
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11/05/2003 11:25:44 AM |
| Interesting effect, but I think I would have liked just a little more contrast. |
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11/05/2003 08:57:31 AM |
| This is beautiful The lightning is great and the softness Feels like in heaven ;) |
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