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Lips Say It All
Lips Say It All

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Challenge: Pencil (Classic Editing)
Camera: Sony Mavica FD-91
Location: Celebration, FL (in my house)
Date: Aug 13, 2002
Date Uploaded: Aug 13, 2002

my lip pencil

Place: 131 out of 185
Avg (all users): 4.9768
Avg (commenters): 6.0000
Avg (participants): 4.9695
Avg (non-participants): 4.9844
Views since voting: 1009
Votes: 259
Comments: 11
Favorites: 0

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 Comments Made During the Challenge
08/22/2002 04:11:00 PM
Perfect pencil. Right along the same lines as what I was thinking. I like the angle and the focus. Very nice. Not sure if you did the shiny reflection on purpose or not, but I mayb have tried to tone it down a bit. But that's just me. I know a lot of people like glare. I like the tan background with the brown-ish red lip pencil. Very nicely done. Good luck in the challenge.
08/22/2002 10:05:00 AM
I think the double shadows underneath distract a bit, but I love the idea of why this pencil's point has been dulled. Lips are great!
08/21/2002 07:02:00 PM
Love the OTT glare on the lippie! Seem to be two shadows for the pencil, is that deliberate? Like the composition very much.
6, Kavey
08/20/2002 07:43:00 PM
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background6,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing7,
Challenge: Does your entry meet it?10,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 4,
Total Averaged Rating7. Autool
08/19/2002 10:22:00 PM
i like the focus and composition, but the blownout highlight is rather severe. also, there appear to be two shadows in the image... perhaps a single light source that was more diffuse would have helped. ~mcmurma
Meets Challenge...6
08/19/2002 07:14:00 PM
I like the shallow depth of focus and the composition overall
08/19/2002 05:26:00 PM
good for you! a different kind of pencil. nice lighting and dof.
08/19/2002 10:12:00 AM
I like the lighting, and I like the focus. I think I'd prefer a different background color, as I don't think white does justice to the almost sexy mood the photograph creates. 6
08/19/2002 05:58:00 AM
Great arrangement and lighting. I like the narrow DoF. Not so sure about the background colour, though.
08/19/2002 02:24:00 AM
The white on the right is a bitt too bright for me. I love the shade of the lip liner though. ;-) 5
08/19/2002 01:51:00 AM
This is a beautiful image. Don't understand the title and don't recognize the pencils but I presume they are really pencils. I love the shadow play in this image. The right pencil ends unfortunately dead center but it is mitigated by the placement of the shadows. Good job. Journey

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