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08/22/2002 04:11:00 PM |
| Perfect pencil. Right along the same lines as what I was thinking. I like the angle and the focus. Very nice. Not sure if you did the shiny reflection on purpose or not, but I mayb have tried to tone it down a bit. But that's just me. I know a lot of people like glare. I like the tan background with the brown-ish red lip pencil. Very nicely done. Good luck in the challenge. |
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08/22/2002 10:05:00 AM |
| I think the double shadows underneath distract a bit, but I love the idea of why this pencil's point has been dulled. Lips are great! |
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08/21/2002 07:02:00 PM |
Love the OTT glare on the lippie! Seem to be two shadows for the pencil, is that deliberate? Like the composition very much.
6, Kavey |
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08/20/2002 07:43:00 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background6,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing7,
Challenge: Does your entry meet it?10,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 4,
Total Averaged Rating7. Autool
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08/19/2002 10:22:00 PM |
i like the focus and composition, but the blownout highlight is rather severe. also, there appear to be two shadows in the image... perhaps a single light source that was more diffuse would have helped. ~mcmurma
Aesthetics...4
Meets Challenge...6
Overall...5 |
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08/19/2002 07:14:00 PM |
| I like the shallow depth of focus and the composition overall |
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08/19/2002 05:26:00 PM |
| good for you! a different kind of pencil. nice lighting and dof. |
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08/19/2002 10:12:00 AM |
| I like the lighting, and I like the focus. I think I'd prefer a different background color, as I don't think white does justice to the almost sexy mood the photograph creates. 6 |
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08/19/2002 05:58:00 AM |
| Great arrangement and lighting. I like the narrow DoF. Not so sure about the background colour, though. |
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08/19/2002 02:24:00 AM |
| The white on the right is a bitt too bright for me. I love the shade of the lip liner though. ;-) 5 |
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08/19/2002 01:51:00 AM |
| This is a beautiful image. Don't understand the title and don't recognize the pencils but I presume they are really pencils. I love the shadow play in this image. The right pencil ends unfortunately dead center but it is mitigated by the placement of the shadows. Good job. Journey |
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