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11/16/2003 06:03:08 PM |
I struggled to find words for a critique while this challenge was running and failed, now I find myself with your image as my first assignment with the critique club.
so here goes;
I like this image. It has a feeling of movement, the colours work and I like the perspective. I also like your choice of border.
A different crop may help. Cropping some of the nebulous swirls at the bottom and cleaning up the top to make it more distinct would create more drama.
I would crop it just below the pink item and use a clone tool or paintbrush to darken & remove the "noise" at the top right and crisp up the edge.
This is a good abstract effort and I think if you experimented a bit more with increasing the angle to lengthen the object it may produce a more provocative image.
I hope this helps.
JC
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11/06/2003 04:57:35 PM |
| Not getting that Seemingly Infinite feeling. Maybe if you had shown a little more in the distance. Can't really make out what this object is. Depth of field needs work. Great colors and contrast. |
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11/06/2003 12:03:05 AM |
| Pretty colors, but I can't see the spiral here. I can't tell what this is either, or see much of a pattern. |
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11/04/2003 01:36:28 PM |
ohhhh cant wait toi find out what this is
nice work |
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11/04/2003 12:02:01 AM |
| I love the colours and use of light. |
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11/03/2003 09:49:43 PM |
| Beautiful shot, I like the way you captured this shot with an upward angle, the angle really adds to this shot.good job |
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11/03/2003 08:09:28 PM |
| interesting abstract, but this photo is almost begging to be vertical rather than horizontal :) |
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11/03/2003 07:33:59 AM |
| I think this would be more expressive of infinity if it were cropped to give the impression that it went on beyond the border of the picture - that is, right up against the top disk. The colors and apparent inner glow are good. |
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