DPChallenge: A Digital Photography Contest You are not logged in. (log in or register
 
Challenge Entries
Portfolio Images
This image is not part of a public portfolio.
Vase and flowers
Vase and flowers
train


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Still Life (Classic Editing)
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix 2600Z
Location: Hamilton New Zealand
Date: Nov 1, 2003
Galleries: Still Life, Floral
Date Uploaded: Nov 1, 2003

N/A

Statistics
Place: 120 out of 326
Avg (all users): 5.3265
Avg (commenters): 6.0000
Avg (participants): 5.3082
Avg (non-participants): 5.3535
Views since voting: 890
Votes: 245
Comments: 6
Favorites: 0


Please log in or register to add your comments!

AuthorThread
11/17/2003 01:01:50 PM
Good Evening Live from the critique club:

Why did this classic, neatly composed and technically above average image get so little commentaries and just a mid-range score? I hope I can give you a few elements of response in that regard.
Re-visiting classics is a fine way to improve skills. But with such subjects, if you want to capture the attention of viewers, your presentation must be really outstanding. Your audience has seen this type of scene not only in photographic forms but in paintings, film and in everyday life so many times that the evaluation standards for this type of image will be rather high. Technically the main flaw I feel in your picture is that the emphasis seems to be given to the background and the vase rather than to the fine hibiscus branches. A more subtle and directional lighting on the plants with a darker background could have taken care of that. Reflecting props such as your vase are always tricky to work with if you use directional lights or flash (difficult to avoid these distracting pure white zones).
Another aspect of this photograph that I don’t feel good about is that there is no “story” attached to it as I see it. Just a vase with a flower in it, I am not learning much about you looking at it either.
If you were to include some unexpected element to the composition, this might stop the viewer, have him think about it, try to imagine how you came up with such an idea and, eventually make up his own story and keep him distracted from the minor flaws of your shot. I a very classic way, your “nostalgia” pic is one that tells a story for example. We should always try to tell a story. Facts (real or invented) are more interesting than things.
Good luck and don’t forget to surprise us,

JJ
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
11/08/2003 10:47:34 PM
a diiferent vase might have been considered here as this one is far too large for the flowers. Wow the blond wood paneling probably was not the best choice either though I like how the wood grain imitates the shape of the vase.
11/08/2003 03:00:58 PM
Nice looking flower. Picture too. 8
11/06/2003 09:22:45 PM
pretty. Has a nice old fashioned feel to it.
11/05/2003 09:34:44 PM
the flower on the table was a bit distracting. My eye followed the vase up and then was yanked back down to that flower.
11/05/2003 08:43:07 AM
Beautiful picture, A little to tight cropping mabey? , mabey not ;) Good luck


Home - Challenges - Community - League - Photos - Cameras - Lenses - Learn - Prints! - Help - Terms of Use - Privacy - Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2019 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Proudly hosted by Sargasso Networks. Current Server Time: 06/19/2019 02:44:46 AM EDT.