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Up Hill & Down Dale
Up Hill & Down Dale
Wellylena


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Pattern II (Basic Editing)
Camera: Nikon D50
Location: In my bedroom!
Date: Dec 26, 2006
Aperture: 18
ISO: 80
Shutter: 1/60
Galleries: Fashion, Still Life
Date Uploaded: Dec 26, 2006

Straight from camera (except save for web). pp not being my strong point!

Statistics
Place: 230 out of 250
Avg (all users): 4.4703
Avg (commenters): 5.0000
Avg (participants): 4.1728
Avg (non-participants): 4.6449
Views since voting: 559
Views during voting: 281
Votes: 219
Comments: 5
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AuthorThread
01/08/2007 12:49:19 AM
Greetings from the Critique Club.

Hi Helena,

Welcome to DPC! Congratulations on your first challenge submission - that's a big first step.

This is a difficult one to critique as there is nothing technically wrong, and I don't have much to go on in terms of your comments. The main issue here is one of composition. I recommend you take the time to read this tutorial on composition -> here

Based on this shot there are thwo aspects that I believe you should begin to consider. The first is colour: these greys tend to make an image look flat, and don't engage the voter. On DPC the voters usually like a nice bit of pop in the shots. The second is leadign lines: in this shot the pattern in the material leads the viewers eye right off the image, so there is no real focal point.

It is my hope that these insights are helpful and constructive. Please feel free to PM me if you have any questions regarding this critique. And please remember to mark it "Helpful" if you found it so. Good luck with future challenges.

Cheers
Paul
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/02/2007 12:05:05 PM
Interesting.
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12/31/2006 04:59:46 PM
Not a fan of the DOF here. Sorry.
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12/29/2006 03:30:08 AM
Good patterns, but would like to see more light on background.
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12/28/2006 04:51:30 PM
bit boring and the direct use of the flashlight is nor really atractive.
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