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Antithesis of Random
Antithesis of Random
Alexgio


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Pattern II (Basic Editing)
Camera: Nikon D70s
Lens: Tamron AF 75-300mm f/4.0-5.6 LD for Nikon
Location: My Living Room
Date: Dec 24, 2006
Aperture: 4
ISO: 1600
Shutter: 1/20
Galleries: Still Life
Date Uploaded: Dec 25, 2006

I lost early in a poker tournament and had some time to kill. this is my first DPchallenge entry i just started my account today. I hope that i get lots of feedback... the more the better ...
The focus is off a little bit because my 28-80mm lense is broken right now and i tried to take this picture inside at night with my 75-300mm telephoto lense so i wanted a better picture but im still proud of my pattern...
Merry Christmas
Alex Gio

Statistics
Place: 229 out of 250
Avg (all users): 4.5207
Avg (commenters): 4.3529
Avg (participants): 4.3077
Avg (non-participants): 4.6403
Views since voting: 724
Views during voting: 291
Votes: 217
Comments: 18
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/02/2007 11:48:33 PM
The color cast is keeping me from voting higher. The whites just aren't whites. Tweaking the curves or channel levels would easily fix this.
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01/02/2007 05:47:02 PM
this is nicely laid out, must`ve taken ages to put together!
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01/02/2007 02:10:51 PM
the light here seems a bit "warm", but i like the pattern.
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01/02/2007 12:32:27 PM
looks washed out
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01/02/2007 10:33:30 AM
The focus here is troubling for me; the entire thing seems out of focus, and while it's a neat idea for a pattern, the bit of floor showing in the upper right corner seems out of place and the background green doesn't work for me. Also, the subject matter isn't well placed in the image field on the whole, I think.
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12/31/2006 07:27:40 PM
I like the concept and your layout. Had there not been the brown portioni nthe upper right and a bit more color contrast (seems a bit flat), I would have scored it higher.
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12/31/2006 05:20:46 PM
this image totaly looks blurry and there are tons of artifacs on the chips and stuff. Also the white balance seems to be off. Other than that, I really Love the idea concept is great. It could have been framed a bit better, But you have a wonderfull idea. I would like to see this again as your skill progresses.
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12/29/2006 07:31:32 PM
I bet that took a while.
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12/29/2006 03:18:11 AM
Good pattern, but picture seems a bit washed out.
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12/28/2006 04:01:54 PM
the object of the picture is really cool, but the picture itself isn't well lit or focused.
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12/28/2006 09:52:13 AM
It seems not steady.
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12/27/2006 07:05:07 PM
I wish the focus were clearer
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12/27/2006 02:04:31 PM
the piece of floor/table in the upper right ruins the whole thing....also, too tightly cropped? having the camera directly overhead might have "made" this shot
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12/27/2006 01:29:30 PM
Very nice pattern. I think a little more contrast would improve this, or maybe it's the focus that is a little soft.
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12/27/2006 10:21:00 AM
I like the idea, but the focus is out or else there is too much noise here.
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12/27/2006 03:51:03 AM
wish this was in better light at a different angle
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12/27/2006 01:05:47 AM
IMHO focus seems soft and white balance is off.
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12/27/2006 12:32:53 AM
It's a great concept but the colors really need some work. Could probably increase the contrast and decrease the brighness to really bring the colors out. Just a thought.
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