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Is There Anybody Out There?
Is There Anybody Out There?
Joey Lawrence


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Challenge: Pink Floyd (Basic Editing)
Camera: Canon EOS-5D
Lens: Canon EF 85mm f/1.8 USM
Location: Kiwi and Nasti's Garden
Date: Dec 16, 2006
Galleries: Emotive, Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Dec 19, 2006

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Statistics
Place: 16 out of 151
Avg (all users): 6.4054
Avg (commenters): 6.2941
Avg (participants): 6.0508
Avg (non-participants): 6.5337
Views since voting: 4692
Views during voting: 463
Votes: 222
Comments: 23
Favorites: 4 (view)

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 01/08/2007 12:16:53 AM
Beautiful! As always, your work astounds me. I will make two humble critiques, however. It does not really make sense that the girl is holding a lantern in daylight. Also, the cropping on the left side is sort of awkward. But, I am a hypocrite when it comes to cropping.
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 12/29/2006 10:32:03 AM
very pretty Joe your stuffs lookin very pro
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/26/2006 05:36:58 PM
DOF is very well executed in this photo, and face is perfectly lit. Something feels a trifle off balance - it may be the close crop on right arm. Whites also look just a tad blown on dress. Overall, very strong entry that would work outside this challenge as well. 8.
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 12/26/2006 04:48:59 PM
This model looks a bit familiar, so does the makeup, this your shot Joey? Nice one, dig the DOF in it :)
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 12/26/2006 04:33:43 AM
enigmatic- like the mood and light a lot
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 12/24/2006 11:23:47 PM
Oohh! Pretty! I love the shallow DOF, colors, lighting, the model's expression...beautiful! Best of challenge!
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 12/23/2006 12:34:00 PM
This should do well.
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 12/23/2006 07:24:36 AM
Cool! Very Narnia! Like it!
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 12/23/2006 05:28:33 AM
8
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 12/22/2006 11:40:16 PM
Very pretty image. Storybook-like.
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 12/22/2006 01:46:30 PM
this is technically very smooth. does not get a strong pink floyd feeling out of it though. more a photo from a fashion magazine. but its kiinda absurd with the kerosine lamp in the daylight.
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 12/21/2006 12:45:17 PM
why does she have a lantern in the middle of the day?
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 12/21/2006 12:38:22 PM
I like this one because I like the song mostly, but it is a good capture.. I'm sure you've already heard it or will hear it, but the clothing is a little too bright. Oh well though, and I'm not sure that the pine boughs closer to you that are out of focus really help the picture at all, they were kind of distracting. Overall, a good shot. 9
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 12/21/2006 01:33:35 AM
I like the subject of the photo and it works well for the challenge, unfortunately the image looks overexposed to me. 5
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 12/20/2006 11:59:12 PM
nice concept.Maybe a flame in the lantern and the evening lights woud have added more to it
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 12/20/2006 06:50:34 PM
Colors are nice and focus is good. Nothing seems blown out. Nice DOF. The one eye looks like it has too much makeup compared to other which is a bit distracting.
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 12/20/2006 05:49:38 PM
it looks overexposed on my screen... good work however Mr. Lawrence!!
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 12/20/2006 04:28:09 PM
very pretty model but expressions are not very convincing to suit the title.
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 12/20/2006 03:56:13 PM
This is a beutiful photograph and I love the DOP but it really bothers me that the story you are trying to show isn't fully realized. It's very bright and there is no light coming from the lantern. Would have worked much better if you had gotten rid of the lantern and just had the girl looking around. Seems a little blown out around her shoulder too.
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 12/20/2006 07:30:27 AM
This looks like one of Larus's pictures. Very nice tones. It does however look a little soft or the focus doesnt seem to be exactly on the face.
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 12/20/2006 07:06:28 AM
sweet and lovely...nice image
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 12/20/2006 03:35:03 AM
makes no sense to me to go out with a light in the bright daylight. And why does she push a branch at the bottom while looking upwards? Lights are blown, don't like the cropped left arm and right thumb, too.
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 12/20/2006 12:26:45 AM
great
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