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12/21/2006 07:14:45 AMPost actions
From the critique club.
Hi,
This is a fantastic image with a nice composition. The best part of it is how the eyes flow first to the face, then to the hands and then lastly to the knives. There are no harsh shadows which make it look perfect and the diagonals of the hair in the face is nicely balanced with the arm going in the opposite direction.
My only comment if it has to be will be about the shiny hand, if it is intentional then I am for it but what if it is a little rough with the dirt texture visible (since you already have a side lighting). I think this would go very well with the rough look on the face.
Technically nothing to be said as I would love to have photographed something like this for my folio.
My criticism is based on my meagre knowledge of composition and photography I would be happy to have any feedback regarding the improvement of the critique.
With regards
Kausik
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12/18/2006 01:58:34 PMPost actions
i think it could've been a bit darker, especially the top arm, but overall very cool image!!!
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12/18/2006 09:11:04 AMPost actions
VERY cool shot. nicely done. congrats
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12/18/2006 07:48:45 AMPost actions
Now that's beautiful dirt if ever I saw it! Really great job!
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12/18/2006 12:40:01 AMPost actions
Like a movie poster. Yes, that good. Congratulations on your top 20 finish.
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Comments Made During the Challenge
12/17/2006 06:49:24 PMPost actions
blood and gore .... bloody excellent!! ...
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12/14/2006 04:20:31 PMPost actions
One of my absolute favorites in this challenge. Make the crop a bit looser and you'd have a perfect horror movie poster. 10!
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12/14/2006 01:47:16 PMPost actions
Very well composed - in fact well executed all round.
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12/14/2006 08:16:30 AMPost actions
Sweet photo...I'd have given it a 10 if I was voting this time around. Good luck to ya.
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12/14/2006 02:22:39 AMPost actions
Beautiful model and expression. Interesting pose.
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12/13/2006 10:51:29 PMPost actions
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12/13/2006 02:07:38 AMPost actions
Lots of expression in those deviant and deceiptful eyes and pouty lips just short of a sickening smile. She made it work.
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12/12/2006 10:16:02 PMPost actions
Nice idea, posing the arm to frame the face works for this composition.
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12/12/2006 05:00:16 PMPost actions
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12/12/2006 12:15:09 PMPost actions
Maybe better in 'Death'? But nice anyways
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12/12/2006 04:01:32 AMPost actions
This is a very goos portrait, which suits this challenge.....
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12/11/2006 08:38:00 PMPost actions
Nicely lit, great expression, interesting composition
9
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12/11/2006 07:39:23 PMPost actions
Definitely gritty and scary - great colors and beautiful model - the crop makes the pose look a tad forced.
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12/11/2006 04:26:55 PMPost actions
Sexy! It's a funky pose and i really like the composition and angles. There's even dirt under her fingernail! i love it. :)
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12/11/2006 04:01:11 PMPost actions
Ooooo... this is grungy! Nice take on the challenge.
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12/11/2006 03:20:29 PMPost actions
For some reason she reminds me of Kirsten Dunst. This is the type of shot I'm digging in this challenge. REAL dirt, not a bit of applied makeup. Nice composition. I like the arm over her head. 8
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12/11/2006 01:17:11 PMPost actions
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12/11/2006 10:36:48 AMPost actions
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12/11/2006 09:18:00 AMPost actions
great shot. i personaly would like to see the eyes better. 8
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12/11/2006 06:59:26 AMPost actions
great expression, good color
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12/11/2006 05:36:28 AMPost actions
I cant think of a thing that makes this better..
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12/11/2006 04:16:46 AMPost actions
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12/11/2006 01:40:40 AMPost actions
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12/11/2006 12:13:33 AMPost actions
awesome...great for the challenge...love the pose and the grittiness...good luck with this
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