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Strawberry peaches and cream rainbow tarts
Strawberry peaches and cream rainbow tarts
neenee1999


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Challenge: Recipe (Food) (Classic Editing)
Collection: challenge shots
Camera: Olympus C-4000Z
Location: my kitchen
Date: Oct 15, 2003
Date Uploaded: Oct 15, 2003

milk, eggs, sugar, flour, oil,strawberry pie filling, blend milk, eggs, sugar and flour, pour into pan add peach juice to the batter, add strawberry pie filling in the middle of each and bake at 350..then add butter cream frosting,

Statistics
Place: 42 out of 58
Avg (all users): 5.2418
Avg (commenters): 5.5263
Avg (participants): 4.8478
Avg (non-participants): 5.4112
Views since voting: 1026
Votes: 153
Comments: 21
Favorites: 0


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10/29/2003 07:46:48 PM
Startling color constast. Very good.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/22/2003 10:28:59 PM
The overall arrangement is nice, and I like the two-toned background. The cream dallops lack detail; more oblique lighting might have shown off their texture better.
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10/21/2003 03:46:11 PM
Yummy!! Looks a bit over-exposed by the looks of the whipped cream, but its got my mouth watering!
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10/20/2003 03:44:18 PM
I really like the background but the whites appear too blown.
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10/19/2003 08:34:23 PM
5.
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10/19/2003 01:34:08 PM
Okay, I just ate and here you are making me hungry.... The one thing I would suggest is that a softer light source would have helped - there's a lot of reflections/glare, and it looks a bit splotchy (probably because of the shapes that are catching the light). The presentation as you set it up is so pretty.... (Now, for voting to finish so I can see the recipe!)
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10/18/2003 05:18:04 PM
The presentation is very nice and I like the split color background. Unfortunately this looks quite oversharpened...and/or maybe the lighting was too strong? The shine on the jelly is quite bright. Other than that, this is very good.
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10/18/2003 12:49:10 PM
nice. make the line down middle more straight tho
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10/17/2003 12:07:49 PM
I think there are too many things going on in this photo. With a recipe this complex I think a plain background and plain dishes would have been better. Makes me hungry though :)
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10/17/2003 10:21:55 AM
I cannot wait for this recipe, I love peaches and strawberries! The brightness of this shot makes it jump out but once you get here the sharpness is a bit much and the tabletop is very distracting being cut in half with color. I would have gone with all red on this one, the white ends up blowing the plate out and being distracting. I'm starting with a 6 on this one but I will be back.
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10/16/2003 09:19:09 PM
I like the composition and the idea, but the image looks out of focus or maybe too much light reflecting off the glass plate, or maybe too much light was used, or resizing for the web may have cause some pixelation or softness
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10/16/2003 09:10:40 PM
Bold, brash, and colourful. Whites are oe, and focus is a bit soft.
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10/16/2003 07:05:59 PM
The exposure here is a bit harsh for my taste. The whites are a bit overpowering.
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10/16/2003 02:48:17 PM
I like the arrangement a lot -- unfortunately the overall quality of the shot seems to be lacking a bit. I'm not sure if you used a flash here, but it seems like the overall image has a bit too much contrast and is a bit blown out in spots. The idea of using the red/white background is great, though.
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10/16/2003 10:28:33 AM
looks like it's oversharpened, the whites are so stark. very nice presentation and color though.
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10/16/2003 10:25:58 AM
Only a 9. I will get picky.. I think the part red background, though a neat idea, didn't work right. Would have been better all white.. IMHO
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10/16/2003 02:43:24 AM
Looks decadent! The background detracts from the composition to me, and the image has a harsh edge to it to me, like its been too contrasted or over-sharpened? I like the presentation of the image - very balanced and well thought out. 5
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10/16/2003 01:03:11 AM
One color background would worked better for me,7 !
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10/16/2003 12:33:43 AM
This is over exposed. Especially on the white side! It's also a little busy.
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10/16/2003 12:18:16 AM
The light is really bright and the background is really busy. Looks pretty good though. Good luck.
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10/16/2003 12:15:20 AM
Looks tasty, but I find the image way too busy. Something needed to not be there, either the background or the patterned plate and bowl. Everything is getting lost.
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