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10/22/2003 11:51:15 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB
by karmat
The first thing that grabbed my attention was the color. That is a lovely shade of purple. The water droplets were not noticeable to me at first, and I think if they had been, the picture overall would have been stronger. Maybe if you could have gotten closer to one and used it as the focal point of the picture, it would have been more effective.
Though meeting the challenge is not the main thing I vote on, I am assuming that you are "revealing" the inside of the plant.
Overall, a good shot. best to you in future challenges.
karmat |
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10/19/2003 02:09:27 AM |
| Fun kale! I like this point of view which exposes the patterns of the leaves. |
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10/17/2003 04:04:34 PM |
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10/16/2003 05:31:17 PM |
| Very inside! The dew on this is wonderful and I have to wonder if it's lettuce or a flower. I'm thinking lettuce because of the edges and the stems coming up through the leaves. The color on this is also a bit distracting overall, can't quite explain why but it doesn't quite appeal to me, it doesn't jump out and grab my attention. The lighting on this does seem to be very good and you get just a tad of reflection off the water. I'm starting this one at a7 |
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10/16/2003 10:09:41 AM |
| Interesting macro, the color is very vibrant. The water droplets appear oversharpened to me. |
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10/14/2003 07:31:31 PM |
| Interesting macro subject. The lighting seems a bit harsh. |
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10/14/2003 12:18:00 AM |
| Most interesting. The shapes are really fascinating. Nice color and clarity. |
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10/13/2003 11:16:00 AM |
| Where is the center of your focus here? To my eye everything appears a little out of focus. The light is so strong it's harsh on the drops of water. Beyond that you have met the challenge and the shot is interesting to look at. |
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10/13/2003 10:01:41 AM |
Good Points:Very interesting, good focus and color
Bad Points: none for the pic, don't like the border though, without would be a 10.
Score:8 |
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10/13/2003 01:32:53 AM |
| inside kale is more like it. |
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