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02/25/2003 08:33:17 PM |
| Nice object doesn't make nice photo~ :-( |
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08/10/2002 05:28:00 PM |
Interesting. (I'm being frank - NOT to offend) The black background is well executed. I don't think that the blue towel (material) does much - maybe to connect with the blue in the sails? Lighting is ok and the the focus is good. 7
Ruthann |
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08/09/2002 09:59:00 AM |
| Too bad you didn't have a black cloth rather than that blue towel. |
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08/09/2002 06:02:00 AM |
| Looks more like an collision between a clipper, a coal barge and some pyjamas to me, Victory looks alot different to this. This ship looks quite cute, maybe some humorous touches would help. The towel sea was worth a try, but I think it cheapens it, a proper stand would look better. There are compression effects, particularly on the strings. The light is good, but overexposes the flags a bit, maybe softening it a bit would help. |
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08/08/2002 03:37:00 PM |
| You know I'm not sure Victory really had stripey sails like that. Lovely model though. Good idea to use a blue towel to represent the sea. Good lighting too. |
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08/07/2002 06:25:00 PM |
| nice composition :) I love these old model ships... i had a few that I managed to destroy as a child :( good shot - jmsetzler |
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08/07/2002 06:38:00 AM |
| I Love the shot and I love the idea. But the bath towel looking base spoils it completely. Technically, I can't fault the picture, but (for me) I felt I was looking at the towel more than the wonderful shipâ€Â¦ (5) |
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08/06/2002 04:43:00 PM |
| The blue fabric/towel under the boat is very distracting to me. I would have preferred to see it completely surrounded by black so that it appeared to be floating in air. The shot also feels "crowded" to me. Maybe landscape with a little more negative space to give the boat room to breathe. Hope this makes sense to you. lhall |
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08/05/2002 10:23:00 PM |
Something old. Use your photographic technique to emphasize the age of your subject.
Composition - good
Technical Aspects - good
Meets Challenge - looks like a new model of an old ship
Visual Impact / Originality - good
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08/05/2002 03:06:00 PM |
| The towel really detracts from an otherwise good shot. 5 |
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08/05/2002 02:47:00 PM |
| Good framing and composition. The blue "sea" is a nice touch. I think if the light was a little more even on the sails, it would be more effective, for me. karmat |
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08/05/2002 02:31:00 PM |
| A darker base would have really helped this more. The towel just throws the whole shot off. |
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08/05/2002 12:40:00 PM |
| This is a beautiful photograph! I would like to have seen it sitting on something with a different texture, though. Something more smooth.... |
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08/05/2002 12:07:00 PM |
| Love the colors and contrast...the towel.rug does kind of look like water too! 8 Lisa |
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08/05/2002 08:06:00 AM |
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