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09/09/2006 09:59:40 PM |
| I like this the lines of the rail leading to you are great - find the background a little distracting though. |
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09/09/2006 06:35:43 PM |
| Very nice. What if you cropped just behind your head? It might eliminate a bit of the busy stuff going on behind you. I like the bright red of your shirt to pull the eye right to you. |
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09/09/2006 05:09:25 PM |
| Good work...stepping outside and shooting them is always hard. |
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09/09/2006 05:07:54 PM |
| cool processing. i agree though my eyes drawn through the photo down the line of the rail and right past you. I have to struggle to obtain my focus on you. does that make sense? |
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09/09/2006 04:29:33 PM |
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09/09/2006 04:27:58 PM |
| I like the leading line and colors. Good composition - although I think if your body had broken the line of the rail, it might have stopped the viewer's eye on you instead of continuing on to the back. |
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09/09/2006 04:22:36 PM |
I like the pose and the area. The rail works as a leading line and takes my eye right to the car at the end. It would work better to have the rail take my eye to you - perhaps by leaning over both rails, etc.
Enjoyable image.
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