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09/15/2006 05:32:32 PM |
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Hello from the Critique club, my name is Jon Rowe, and i will be looking at your image this evening :)
Composition/Lighting : i really like this photo. as far as lighting goes, i believe it's spot on. seems like you had enough light, and i love the softness of this photo. i believe the only think i would do differently is it seems that the neatimage look on the face was too much. it looks "too perfect", which is something i struggle w/ as well. almost plastic or "ken and barbie"-ish if that makes sense? maybe doing what you did on its own level, but taking the opacity down will help show some of the "blemishes", but at a lower rate to where you get the smooth look you ere going for.
Challenge : with an overused technique such as selective desaturation, it's always great to see one that actually uses it well and for what it was meant. i think selective desat for this was a great choice, and very well done. the pastels are really brought to the attention of the viewer, and done so in a great and non-overbearing manner. great job :)
Conclusion : great job, really like this image. you had a great score, and should be proud of this image. very nice job:)
Keep on shootin!
Good luck on your future challenges:)
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09/10/2006 07:35:00 PM |
| I love the taste of those things but they're a pain to get off! Don't like your spot desat here though (sorry) - it's too heavy-handed and would have made sense anyway without the grey skin. |
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09/10/2006 04:07:04 PM |
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09/08/2006 04:01:34 PM |
| This is good, but if it were more in focus, it would be great. 7. |
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09/06/2006 09:44:41 PM |
| cool - I like that the pastels are the only colors you've chosen to be in the photo |
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09/04/2006 10:49:41 PM |
| I remember candy beads! I like the use of selective color here. The childs expression is fantastic too. |
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09/04/2006 06:46:24 PM |
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09/04/2006 10:45:20 AM |
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09/04/2006 04:36:37 AM |
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09/04/2006 02:23:05 AM |
| good as a selective desat, but the shot is quite blurry |
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09/04/2006 01:31:24 AM |
| I cant say I like the selective desat but still cool 7 |
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09/04/2006 12:14:30 AM |
Ahhh...those candy necklaces. I can still taste them.
I like the softness and the desaturation works very well. |
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