Nice clearity, action, good since of the game. But I think it would have been more apealing to get a 'Cruch' shot or even a 'Snot Bubble' shot. Those are the ones people remember. But very nice.
just missed the moment! a fraction of a second later when the running back was about to contact the ball would have had more impact.
clear shot though!
An ok action shot, but I thought I'd add some suggestions since sports photography is one of my favority things (I shoot Steelers games for a local newspaper). My first suggestion is to focus on the action. There's a bit too much clutter here in the form of players that aren't intregal to the scene. I'd probably make this a vertical shot of just the quarterback, and get rid of the guys on the right and left.
I think this would have been a bit stronger if we were able to see the running back, or whomever the ball is being handed to. As it is, it seems like it lacks a bit of punch since this isn't really a decisive moment of the game, and we can't clearly see any really good facial expressions.
Composition: 6 - Nicely framed with lots of stuff going on all around the central point of the ball
Technical: 7 - Well exposed, emotion captured, just the cropping of half the leftmost person is a small distraction. DoF works well, but shallower to hide the fence would improve it imo.
Creativity: 4 - There isnt anything here that to me separates it from other football shots.
Appeal: 5 - The nice rich colours and lots of things happening means this holds my attention for a while.
Good idea. I imagine you coudn't help this angle on this play. I can't see the RB though. If I didn't know football, I might mistake the quarterback for being confused. Good shot though.