The pupils of her eyes look a little off. They probably should have been darkened some to give them a none ghostly look. The overall crop and color of the photos is done well.
Nice portrait with pleasant lighting overall.
A couple of things. The letters on her shirt, though out of focus, have a glare that draws my eyes to them, stealing the focal point away for her eyes. A little more smile would have made a big difference too, as a woman's smile warms the soul.
with this being an advanced editing challenge I'm surprised that you didn't clone out the stray hairs on her face ... the one across her lip is especially distracting to me ...
I like the depth of field and the focus on Keonna's eyes...lighting is good, but the distracting stray hairs should have been cloned out...they spoil an otherwise great portrait 7