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Challenge: Tools (Classic Editing*)
Camera: Canon PowerShot G2
Location: NYC
Date: Aug 26, 2003
Aperture: 4.0
ISO: 50
Shutter: 1/125
Date Uploaded: Aug 26, 2003

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Statistics
Place: 241 out of 256
Avg (all users): 3.9108
Avg (commenters): 5.0000
Avg (participants): 3.6667
Avg (non-participants): 4.2083
Views since voting: 691
Votes: 213
Comments: 19
Favorites: 0


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09/09/2003 08:12:07 PM
*Critique CLub*

Your idea here is very good, it would make for some good photojournalism but it is to soft. You need to sharpen it up a bit. Tools was the challenge subject and the tool in this case appears to be a baseball bat, and it should be the main subject not a blurry little area of the photo.

Looking at the photo in a fast glance many voters would have given you a low score not seeing the baseball bat. Might I strongly suggest you don't use "Untitled" as a subject. I feel a photo without a title is missing part of it's personality as well as part of the photographers personality. As I look at it I would easily title it something like "Meet my brother the Louisville Slugger" Simply knowing most people know that a Louisville Slugger is a bat, it would make the average voter stop and realize there was a bat in the photo and that is what you wanted the voter to recognize as the tool.

Anna
 Comments Made During the Challenge
09/02/2003 09:58:46 PM
Nice photojournalism shot, good catch.
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09/02/2003 06:47:59 PM
This is certainly genuine and these shots are tough to capture. I believe this is worth full marks for its courage and journalism. Technically, it's a bit soft so it gets a 9, but the capture is great.

More value should be placed on opportunistic shots like this - it's why the camera is such a valuable tool itself. I hope yours scores higher than my Desolation shot. ;)
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09/02/2003 03:05:03 PM
have to hunt for the tool, seems a moment before the "ideal" shot. Background a bit busy too.
09/02/2003 07:18:07 AM
I thank he was mad ! lol lol You did a great job of capturing emotion. He is uesing the ball bat as a tool. the size of the photo is a little small but i am giveing you a 9 ( I like this photo)
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08/30/2003 06:48:12 PM
Looks like a 'shoot the picture and run' situation... nice capture, a little hard to see what he is holding...
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08/29/2003 04:43:38 PM
uh... what tool ?
08/29/2003 10:42:30 AM
great shot.. great photo journalism.. Its reminds me of what we were always told in the military... Only use a tool for its intended purpose!!!! High marks for a great capture of motion and emotion
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08/28/2003 08:05:01 PM
angry tools
08/28/2003 05:52:37 PM
Is that a fight happening?
08/28/2003 02:29:50 PM
there's a story here, but it's too difficult to see based on the way the shot is framed.
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08/28/2003 02:20:05 PM
tools ?they may look a little wierd but that is a really harsh description
08/28/2003 05:17:16 AM
Tools of trade... This is great candid shot. Love the facial expressions of the two man facing me. Too bad it's a bit out of focus.
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08/28/2003 01:47:40 AM
?cant understand?
08/27/2003 06:47:23 PM
Interesting shot, but hard to see what tool is involved, or what it's role is.
08/27/2003 01:56:34 PM
are you talking about the bat or the guy? :) nice capture. good composition.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
08/27/2003 12:08:56 PM
I suppose the guy wielding the tool could be a tool himself? Could have used a title. Perhaps: Tool wielding a tool" or something along those lines.
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08/27/2003 11:39:22 AM
Tools?
08/27/2003 11:37:32 AM
Very photojournalistic. It's a tad out of focus though, but hey, I wouldn't want to get any closer to the action either...
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