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01/11/2007 11:19:27 PM |
i absolutely loved this one in the challenge and was going to give it an 8 or 9, then i was interrupted and never went back ...
love the feel of this ..imo the light from the broken windows gives a sense of promise ... |
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07/01/2006 02:15:41 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
This is a shot that is wonderfully tought out in it's composition and feel as stated from your comments. I love the desolated feeling, it worked and fit perfectly in the challenge.
Two things though jumped out at me right away that bothered me a bit though. First was the lines, wonderful lines, leading me in and around and very intresting but they all seem a bit tilte to the right. A slight rotation to balance them out might not give me the slight feeling of vertigo I feel when I do look at it for too long.
Second was the brightness of the shot. You mention that you cropped out some of the brighter areas, maybe by switching this to b/w or sepia and a bit of burning to take some of the edge of the windows on the left would really bring out the desolate feeling in this shot. Or even adjusting the levels in the color version to help darken some of the areas.
If you rework this shot or try anything else with it I would love to see the results, it's got great potential!
Good luck in future challenges and I hope my comments help!
Deannda |
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06/25/2006 11:12:01 PM |
| good lines, great colors. |
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06/25/2006 09:27:51 AM |
| Good detail, color and perspective- meets the challenge. |
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06/23/2006 06:52:30 AM |
| Well handled conditions. I like the textures and colours. |
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06/20/2006 07:46:57 PM |
| I like the diagonal of the wall leading into the image. |
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06/19/2006 03:57:07 PM |
| I like the colors a lot, the loose floorboards, and the genrally abandoned feeling of the interior. The title works perfectly to describe why you chose to not crop out the sunshine and green leaves. It could use a slight counter-clockwise rotation though, 'cause it doesn't look quite straight. Also, I like the angle, but would love to see it from a lower point of view to add some drama. Nice job, though - hope you don't mind my comments. |
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06/19/2006 09:35:42 AM |
| The greenery is a symbol of encraoching hope and life. Remove that with some processing and then you have more complete desolation. |
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06/19/2006 08:15:01 AM |
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06/19/2006 07:55:51 AM |
| great moodiness in this shot, well done |
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