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06/24/2006 12:21:43 AM |
---Greetings from the Critique Club!---
First impression - I wish I owned a vineyard! ;-)
Meets the challenge - OK, but . . . the shadow doesn't really add to the quality of the photo, IMO.
While this is indeed a shadow, if not for the challenge category, this picture does not do well on its own. The shadow gets in the way of a really nice scene that is particularly well photographed.
The choice to go black & white was a good one. The burning down in the sky area is a little over done though. The image is clear and crisp but lacks a true focal point. The eyes do not have a place to settle in within the picture area.
It is a nice photo that is exposed well and processed well. I think a more distinct focal point would have helped this entry a lot.
I hope this was helpful. Feel free to contact me if you have any questions.
David
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06/18/2006 11:24:47 PM |
| The image is exceptionaly sharp and makes a good B&W. Tones are very nice. Wish mine were as nice. The use of shadow is weak in this composition for this particular challenge and the sky is unrealistically darkened. |
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06/17/2006 02:22:02 AM |
| Nicely done.. What country is this in.. it looks like a mad place.. I've seen those kinds of house before hmm oh well 7 |
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06/15/2006 07:07:35 AM |
| Now that is a large shadow...I love that sky...it keeps drawingme to it. |
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06/13/2006 10:59:40 PM |
| that sure is one big fat cloud and very nicely done. I like the b & w for this |
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06/12/2006 04:28:32 PM |
| Very dramatic. I think the shadow would have more impact if this were in color though. |
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06/12/2006 09:26:28 AM |
| a very natural shadow, enhanced in the B&W effect |
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06/12/2006 02:43:36 AM |
| Shadows can be big as well ... wouold like to have seen this in color |
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